Thursday, 3 April 2014

Shadorma

 Day 5

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the young girl
with dark chestnut plaits
plays hopscotch
on a street
no bird song car noise  people
just her in silence

11 comments:

  1. Beautiful a simple delight.

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  2. I like the visual this presents - I wonder if she has pig-tails

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  3. i think i would be captured just to sit and watch her and let all the rest drift to the background....

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  4. so lost in her play that she forgets the world around her... think i know her..smiles

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  5. The delights of being so absorbed in what you do... a lovely clear image flashes there, moment of insight. The frog jumping into the pond.

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  6. Kids can really get lost in what they are doing. I can just see her, Cressida.

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  7. there is something magical about girls playing hopscotch.

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  8. The silence is magical, allowing the reader to really see that little girl.

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  9. I think the silence is the one she create in the hopscotching ...

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  10. I bet her silence sounds an awful lot like concentrated contentment. Lovely write.

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