Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st,
Nor shall death brag thou wand'rest in his shade,
When in eternal lines to Time thou grow'st.
So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
It is interesting to note the contrast in the two poems, when words of one were taken from the other. Very intriguing.
ReplyDeleteNice mix of hip old English with a touch of pink.
ReplyDeleteQuite a delightful read!❤️
ReplyDeleteAh, that's a job well done through the erasing elements in bringing about an interesting verse. :-)
ReplyDeleteA really interesting read.
ReplyDeleteShakespeare erased! Gives it a whole new meaning. :)
ReplyDeletewell, that certainly changes the meaning of this "shakespeare" poem. Erasure poems are fun... well played.
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