The Tragedy of Leaves
Charles Bukowski
that’s the tragedy of the leaves,
the dead ferns, the dead plants;
and I walked into a dark hall
where the landlady stood
execrating and final,
sending me to hell,
waving her fat, sweaty arms
and screaming
screaming for rent
because the world has failed us
both
maybe it was your name
or Mr Chinaski's editor who insisted
poetry should be written in rondo form
poetry should be written in rondo form
the stale smell of beer
or the empty wine bottles rolling around
like bleeding corpses on the floor
in the madrigal rooming house
your love for cats
no
it was your mother trying to be
a happy goldfish circling endlessly around
in the bowl who clinched it for me
Charles Bukowski set the bar very high for post modern poets, and his was a lasting and meaningful contribution to authenticity. Your piece is a great tribute. I love the style; the way you have expressed a kind of suppressed emotion by close attention to detail.
ReplyDeleteI love this poem. Bukowski is a master of modern poetry. You did an excellent write and an amazing poem. I did not know of his love of cats. Thank you for this poem.
ReplyDeleteWhat an absolutely fantastic tribute poem, Cressida!!💞
ReplyDeleteThe mother as happy goldfish is a wonderful image! I loved this!
ReplyDeleteI love how you emulated Bukowski's style and tone here. There's a certain existential despair here which makes it quite evocative. Well penned. 😄
ReplyDeleteThe crystal-like bleeding corpses conjure us such a fantastic image, but... I agree, happy goldfish are such a clincher.
ReplyDeleteYou got me from the opening of this piece. It has hints of Bukowski yet full of your unique voice. Wow!
ReplyDeleteWhat a delightful and enlightening read this is. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteLoved it.
ReplyDeleteMama as a goldfish? Well, why not?! The image makes me smile, although maybe you didn't mean for me to smile. Sometimes it's hard to tell.
ReplyDeleteLove it. Gonna read more Bukowski now.
ReplyDeleteInteresting to see how many people like Bukowski. He's not my favorite, but I do credit him with talent and with making a mark on modern poetry. Your poem provokes thought. So well done.
ReplyDeleteThe mom/goldfish image works so well! It nails the spin of the rest of the poem, at least for me. :)
ReplyDeletelove the narrative voice you found, the links between rondo and rolling bottles, encircling arms and goldfish in a bowl
ReplyDeleteLoved the tribute poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the reminder
ReplyDeleteZQ
"because the world has failed us both" We're on the wrong planet!
ReplyDeleteAh, how you've clinched the despair.
ReplyDeleteMuch💟love
Nice one
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