Sunday, 2 December 2018

Sunday's Whirligig

awesome kisses missing acrobat apron  chord
aim afraid play test goodbye admire


i have always admired the way you
toss your pancakes like an acrobat
testing the fragility of the hanging light shade
aiming at the ceiling
you in your butcher's apron
playing the saucepan with spoons
to the chords of  all i want for christmas is you

i'm afraid i am missing you
sending  awesome kisses
goodbye for now

Poetry Pantry # 431

7 comments:

  1. I can see him flipping pancakes and playing spoons to the song. How cool.

    ReplyDelete
  2. You weaved the words wonderfully here.

    ReplyDelete
  3. I love how you cleverly worked these words into a wonderful scene playing before our eyes.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

    ReplyDelete
  4. So beautifully written. Thankyou that was great. I love watching the film each time it's shown on TV.

    ReplyDelete
  5. There is definitely an art to turning pancakes, mostly unappareciated.

    ReplyDelete