Bewilder -Matchbook - Abrasion - Semicircle -Noticeable -Alice and Wonderland Syndrome
it must be noticeable
her going round in semicircles
her self absorption
her insecurity
it's part of her condition
alice in wonderland syndrome
you seem bewildered
to see your phone number
written in her matchbook
on a nearby table
she would never offend you
or be abrasive
she was raised to be polite
all she wants is to share your parka
on a cold rainy night
Good one!
ReplyDeleteShe can share my parka. Love the intimacy of this.
ReplyDeletethere is a softness with the intimacy... lovingly penned
ReplyDeleteI can almost see her.
ReplyDeleteyou seem bewildered
ReplyDeleteto see your phone number
written in her matchbook
on a nearby table
I really love these lines - their aspect is fascinating and intriguing and adds this complexity to this little story here ...
The small "wants" of another, can be very large to the to the one who is asked to give.
ReplyDeleteI really love this one, profound and elegantly composed
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