Tuesday, 22 May 2018

Quadrille


she sat alone
in the church
looking dignified and lovely
in pistachio green
the sole representative of her daughter's family
at least the rain stayed away 
in a few days she would be back home
drinking real  coffee reading the newspaper
smiling pinching herself

 Poets United...Midweek Motif
Dverse



16 comments:

  1. I noticed that too! I was so concerned about her that I ignored the rest of the congregation. What a lovely woman and an original take on the prompt!

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  2. This is a brilliant response to the prompt, Cressida!💜 Kudos.

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  3. A lovely tribute to the bride’s mother. I wouldn’t be surprised if she pinches herself occasionally. Her daughter is living such a life!

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  4. You've captured this scene perfectly!

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  5. I like this take on the prompt as well. Nicely written.

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  6. Wouldn't she..just? She struck such a graceful figure. The emotion in her eyes..... we all felt it.
    You knocked this one out of the park, Cressida!

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  7. I liked this one...the Mother of the Bride has a role to play.

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  8. Yes, she was serenity herself. You've sketched her beautifully.

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  9. There is a sense of isolation in being the sole representative from one's family present.

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  10. Yes indeed! she deserves this tribute

    much love...

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  11. I felt her sitting alone, too. I hope she chose that, as a time to sit in herself and glow. I hope she was not lonely. She deserves tribute!

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  12. I was moved by her dignity and grace as well. Not every mother gets to see her daughter grow up to be a princess. I love this poem, and love the photo.

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  13. What a nice tribute to someone who humbly, joyously accepted her role.

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  14. Who could not have shared her pride that her daughter was now a member of the British royal family. You can see were Meghan got her looks from. What a really beautiful poem.

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  15. I love that you paid tribute to her. The photo is stunning. So much can be read in her expression.

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