Saturday, 13 June 2015

Sunday Afternoon


Sunday Whirligig 11

secret think poem bronze alarming storm
speak bath gossip sour thirsty razors

i don't  think much of poems written by
alarmingly 'thirsty  for gossip' sourpusses
secret plotters razor tongued speakers of spite



i'd rather soak in a hot bubble bath
listening to natalie cole
on a stormy sunday afternoon
with a bronze aussie


8 comments:

  1. I think that is definitely a good choice for a Sunday afternoon..great photo also!

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  2. Now that is an economic use of the words. Is that a selfie of your knee?

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  3. This is brilliantly succinct and delicious :-)

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  4. Impressive...and dreamy.

    Thanks for visiting and thank you for your comment. I posted a little story I wrote later this morning. You might enjoy it.

    Have a wonderful week.

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