Sunday Whirligig 11
secret think poem bronze alarming storm
speak bath gossip sour thirsty razors
i don't think much of poems written by
alarmingly 'thirsty for gossip' sourpusses
secret plotters razor tongued speakers of spite
i'd rather soak in a hot bubble bath
listening to natalie cole
on a stormy sunday afternoon
with a bronze aussie
I think that is definitely a good choice for a Sunday afternoon..great photo also!
ReplyDeleteNow that is an economic use of the words. Is that a selfie of your knee?
ReplyDeleteNo
DeleteOh, would you now? ;)
ReplyDeleteIt's poetry...just poetry :) !
DeleteThis is brilliantly succinct and delicious :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you CC. Succinct is difficult !
DeleteImpressive...and dreamy.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting and thank you for your comment. I posted a little story I wrote later this morning. You might enjoy it.
Have a wonderful week.