sunflower rainstorm puddles beach waves
making love seagulls rain storm lightning mountain peony nightingalea sunflower droops
battered by a rain storm
petals float in puddles
lying on a beach
waves washing over us
making love on our minds
seagulls huddle together
in the rain storm on the deck
lightning strikes the mast
found on the mountain
a bunch of peonies in
the nightingale's nest
your haiku just flow beautifully!
ReplyDeleteI love it -- wonderful images!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, love how you handled the making love line.
ReplyDeleteYou make agile use of the given words and the haiku flow together effortlessly.
ReplyDeleteThat last haiku is superb, and the seagulls on deck is a vivid image - you really went for it, and made your haiku 'real' - for a reader that is a delight, to be able to relate
ReplyDeleteVery well done!
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