mindlovemisery's menagerie
tsk the elegant prayer shawl wont save you
nor the petition
improvised scripture interpretation gets you a stay
in the oubliette with the inquisition
all the syrupy pleading and promises
will not cause a ripple or a dent in their decision
you wont need baggage where you're going
you're up shit canal without a paddle
Oh my very clever
ReplyDeleteI've been in that canal not a nice place!
Well that sounds pretty final!
ReplyDeleteIf making the reader feel claustrophobic and hopelesswas your goal, you succeeded with me. Well-crafted work here. I'm impressed with where you went with the chosen words.
ReplyDelete(I had to Google the definition ofoubliette.)
Ah yes this blog is a mine of useful information :)
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