Fuyuko Tomita's Poem
How lonely I would be
left behind on my desk
an unfinished poem
in the glorious morning sun
Paloma's Response
at the bird feeder
three cardinals are squabbling
a love triangle?
the poem that nudges my ribs
is fading with laundry
Cressida's response
love triangle poems
her lines obliterated
by lipstick smears and tea stains
hidden in match boxes
all over the house
Oh, what a powerful response --- I LOVE THIS.
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Doff my cap back to you....great work !
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