Saturday, 7 February 2015

Haibun In Blue



hai bun
if you have been traded in
for a newer younger model
enjoy your freedom
no point in feeling blue
entertaining thoughts
of volunteering to work abroad
in a leper colony
or joining the carmelites

one day he'll come along
his eyes may not be sky blue 
but they will hold the sun

3 comments:

  1. Exactly! Who cares the eye color as long as they hold the sun?

    Fragmentary Blue

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  2. I like the positive spin you have put on the whole idea of moving on.

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  3. Really enjoyed the video! Just awesome. And if offered a younger model .. or them. Oh, no contest. Them! And I agree, dark eyes can be even better than blue - its all in the seeing.

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