DAY 7
CENTOI see you drinking at a fountain with tiny
blue hands, no your hands are not tiny
they are small
the fountain is in France
All the perfume of Arabia will not sweeten this little hand
where you wrote me that last letter and
I loved you
like a man loves a woman he never touches
only writes to, keeps little photographs of
Do you think I am easier to played on than a pipe?
Some, Cupid kills with arrows, some with traps
Next time, take my left arm or a fifty
but not my poems
I'm no Shakespeare
My words fly up my thoughts remain below
pretty soon everyone was yawning
but as God said, crossing his legs
I see where I have made plenty of poets
but not so very much poetry
SOURCES
SHAKESPEARE
Macbeth
Hamlet
Much Ado About Nothing
BUKOWSKI
Paris
To the whore who took my poems
I am visited by an editor and a poet
DAY 8
must be more vigilant
maybe paranoid
curly locks curly locks
wilt thou be mine
thou shalt not wash dishes
nor yet feed the swine
discrinatory
being paranoid perhaps
hey diddle diddle
the cat and the fiddle
the cow jumped
over the moon
animal abuse
mirror mirror
on the wall
who is the fairest
of us all
encouraging narcissism
paranoid?
maybe
maybe not
THE OWL AND THE PUSSY CAT
Edward Lear's classic children's poem
is now deemed to be offensive
because of the word pussy
Welcome to our weird world
i've been around
since the beginning
most of the others
have gone
can't believe
i'm still standing
can't say
much good came
from their arrival
all armed
wearing smart uniforms
clicking heels
hoisting flags
little kids
used to play house
with their toys
in my roots
no longer
all on phones now
the elves and fairies
have gone
who knows
when i'm destined
for the chop
progress?
DAY 10
CINQUAIN
her grief
is palpable
she had to let him go
for his sake and for hers twas
so tragic
sadly
she will never
recover from this pain
the light has gone from her world for
ever
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Excellently done Rall 👏
ReplyDeleteCressida, this was such an interesting pairing to work from. Bukowski and Shakespeare are hardly mild company, and I really enjoyed the tension that comes from bringing them into the same room. The cento form suits that collision so well! It lets echoes and contrasts do the talking. Also, it’s lovely visiting another Blogspotter’s blog! Yours is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThe last line hits, hurts, pushes me to introspect.
ReplyDeleteAnd this line is golden because of how true it rings--''My words fly up my thoughts remain below"
Fantastic read.