Wednesday, 17 December 2025

W3 Prompt #190- The Skeptics Kaddish


Bondi Beach 
-the sea that bares her bosom to the moon

the winds that will be howling at all hours
along with the tears grief blood and mayhem
memories that will never leave us 
it was something that we could never envisage
our innocence now lost
so many came  here to escape
the world has caught up with us
we did not want
a world too much with us
for this for everything we are out of tune

paradise
for many
for all of us
now lost





The World Is Too Much With Us......Wordsworth






7 comments:

  1. Heartbreakingly beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this.

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  2. A lament that is beautiful in the starkness of the truth...

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  3. Thank you for your response to this awful tragedy!

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  4. You captured the heartache of this moment of evil so well.

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  5. Rall, the way you use “the world has caught up with us” really lands for me — that’s exactly the feeling... And the way it ends with paradise… “now lost” feels devastating.

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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