Wednesday, 8 February 2023

Whirligig # 409...FRIDAY WRITINGS PSU

 

 

 

it is their 

picture perfect love story

nothing has changed

a curtain of  sleet rain 

snow 

meetings in alley ways

names

wet feet

don't matter

they are ecstatically happy

they give each other joy

they have crossed the line

a toothbrush will be

a permanent addition

to the overnight handbag


THIS WEEK'S WORDS come from "Short Essay on Love" by Sarah Marguso: alley, changed, curtain, picture, love, snow, lines, happy, toothbrush, story, names, give

 

4 comments:

  1. Oh, that's such a wonderful use of the words! Nice way to put "toothbrush" in there, like it wasn't the odd word out! There's always one harder to fit in, but it doesn't look like it was for you.

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  2. The imagery in the words merged with the rain splashed art creates such a happy feeling of lasting connection.

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  3. You brought that picture more alive with your words

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