AN ERASURE POEM FROM T S ELIOT
THE LOVE SONG OF J ALFRED PRUFROCK
let us go then you and i
when the evening is spread out against the sky
let us go in the room by the terrace
it was a soft october night
indeed there will be time
time for you and time for me
time to wonder
do i dare
to spit out all the butt ends
of my days and ways
is it perfume from a dress
that makes me so digress
smoothed by long fingers
asleep stretched on the floor
you and me
settling
a pillow by her head
throwing off a shawl
i am an attendant lord glad to be of use
at times almost ridiculous
i grow old
i shall walk upon the beach
I have heard the mermaids singing
I have seen them riding seaward
combing the white hair of the waves
we have lingered in the chambers of the sea
and we drown
See Above Post for original T S Eliot Poem

There is such romance AND tragedy here. What a mood. AND The Crash Test Dummies sang: Afternoons will be measured out
ReplyDeleteMeasured out, measured with Coffeespoons and T.S. Eliot
A nice long October night feels warmer in a lover's embrace.
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely ... especially walking on the beach, and the mermaids. Cheers.
ReplyDeleteI can SEE the mermaids "combing the white hair of the waves." I went to the beach today - the waves are wild and big right now. Glorious.
ReplyDeleteI love Alfred Prufrock... the poem keeps revealing more each time I go back to it!
ReplyDeleteNice tribute to Eliot and adaptation of his words into something new!
ReplyDeleteI like your playing with time--the meaning of it and the rythmn of it--taken from the Eliot poem and made your own. ANd I love the illustration.
ReplyDeletean enigmatic piece which has layers of meaning within. Much to ponder.
ReplyDeleteRub out some "Wasteland" and there's a glint of Klimt! Loved it -
ReplyDeleteThis is such a beautiful poem of love.
ReplyDeleteSimply a gorgeous homage to the original poem!
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