Wednesday, 3 August 2022

Whirligig # 382

 

This Weeks Words come from " Cape Cod" by George Santayana


WORDLE


the sorrow becomes huge

burning deeply within the charred remains

of his thin body

lying in a pine box


the wind blew up

from the shore line

the palms bending

in the salty breeze

his soul flies to heaven

 

 thin, pine, salt, charred, burned, fly, huge, sorrow, deep, shore, wind, become 

 

 


8 comments:

  1. We read rather the same image into the words this week!

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  2. That's OK ! Great minds and all that:)

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  3. A wonderful vignette of transition from the end life here on Earth to a new and better life in Heaven.
    Good job with the words.
    And thanks for letting me comment as the Anonymous moniker I've been relegated to use.
    ..
    Jim,
    jimmiehov6.blogspot.com
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  4. The picture you created with poetry is deep, with wonderful meaning ......

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  5. Sorrow crackles through the use of the wordle. You used them effectively to create a mood.

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  6. Not sure if the page saved my comment or not, but this is beautifully solemn and sad.

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  7. Oh this is so melancholic and heartfelt. So well written

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