jonquils were your favourite flowers
so i left a basket of them
on your doorstep
i see you
hiding behind the curtain
pretending you are not at home
i can read your mind
just as well
This holds a subtle note of longing. Beautiful ❤️
Nice one. Luv the fact that you did something nice regardless. Thanks for the musicHappy you dropped by my blogMuch💖love
There's a mystery implied here that leaves us all wondering!
a rather gripping poem, i can feel the tension and the love in it, very well written
Sometimes caring can be awkward - giving and receiving - and always, things understood are left unsaid... We do like to complicate things :)
Do tell us more ... I know there is a story bursting at the seams. Well done.
It was a nice thing to do regardless of the reaction.
it's nice to be important but more important to be nice.
This holds a subtle note of longing. Beautiful ❤️
ReplyDeleteNice one. Luv the fact that you did something nice regardless. Thanks for the music
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped by my blog
Much💖love
There's a mystery implied here that leaves us all wondering!
ReplyDeletea rather gripping poem, i can feel the tension and the love in it, very well written
ReplyDeleteSometimes caring can be awkward - giving and receiving - and always, things understood are left unsaid... We do like to complicate things :)
ReplyDeleteDo tell us more ... I know there is a story bursting at the seams. Well done.
ReplyDeleteIt was a nice thing to do regardless of the reaction.
ReplyDeleteit's nice to be important but more important to be nice.
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