Friday, 17 September 2021

Cavatina

 

 

 i see you 

standing at the water's edge

 blissful and beautiful

 

 my love for you

overwhelms me

like the huge wave

crashing on the shore

yet i know

i'm not the one in your thoughts

nor will ever be 


still

life goes on

the tides keep rolling in 

the sun also rises and sets 

reason is music to a jaded heart

as i watch the broken pieces 

slip away and float out to sea


Weekly Scribblings # 88 PSU


6 comments:

  1. Sad but beautiful; the prompt line incorporated seamlessly.

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  2. Love (that isn't equally returned) can be a terrible force. I can see the depth of emotions, the longing... and also the quality of a heart that knows when to walk away. Also, what Rosemary said.

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  3. I started out with a deer at the water's edge and progresses to a human lost in love.
    Enjoyed the mudic video
    Happy Wednesday

    Much💖love

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  4. I've had a couple of friends like yours, "yet i know
    i'm not the one in your thoughts nor will ever be."
    Yet for me, and the her(s), things were very enjoyable,
    just that we knew there could be more that we didn't take.
    ..

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  5. This beautifully portrays love not returned .... and recovery. Well done.

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