Nice Tan Renga Cressida ... I like the "pivot" from the 1st stanza into the 2nd. Pivot: //the butterfly dream / weeds not her thing she prefers / bright yellow chrysanthemums //Well done
Nice Tan Renga Cressida ... I like the "pivot" from the 1st stanza into the 2nd. Pivot: //the butterfly dream / weeds not her thing she prefers / bright yellow chrysanthemums //
ReplyDeleteWell done