Monday, 9 October 2017

Tan Renga - Into The Sea

melting into the sea
the full moon
leaves a candle bright

© Jane Reichhold (1937-2016)

white froth on dark navy blue
god has left the light switch on

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai
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4 comments:

  1. Chèvrefeuille10 October 2017 at 11:50

    Nice continuation with a high dose of spiritual humour.

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  2. Pat R10 October 2017 at 11:53

    Nice! This made me smile:)

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  3. Elsie Hagley11 October 2017 at 12:44

    Interesting finish. Thanks for sharing your thought's on a perfect haiku. Enjoyed it.

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  4. lynn__12 October 2017 at 20:50

    Yes! I wrote something similar here (just had to share): https://madhatterpoetry.com/2017/07/16/leave-a-light-on/

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