Wednesday, 11 October 2017

Heeding Haiku With Chevrefeuille




A new year begins
With the blooming
Of a single frosty rose
Mizuhara Shuoshi (1892-1981)

he kissed each petal
thoughts of the ice queen
came rushing back

MLMM
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4 comments:

  1. Vivian Zems11 October 2017 at 10:22

    You did justice to a great poem by adding some spice to it. Good write :)

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  2. Jules12 October 2017 at 08:30

    Under a spell?
    Broken with kissing the rose petals?
    Nicely done.
    ~Jules

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  3. Elsie Hagley12 October 2017 at 12:32

    Nice haiku, thanks for sharing.

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  4. Chèvrefeuille16 October 2017 at 12:58

    A beautiful haiku.

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