Monday, 9 October 2017

For Librans

October

by Robert Frost (1874-1963)           

O hushed October morning mild,
Thy leaves have ripened to the fall;
To-morrow's wind, if it be wild,
Should waste them all.
The crows above the forest call.
To-morrow they may form and go.
O hushed October morning mild,
Begin the hours of this day slow,
Make the day seem to us less brief.
Hearts not averse to being beguiled, 
Beguile us in the way you know;
Release one leaf at break of day;
At noon release another leaf;
One from our trees, one far away;
Retard the sun with gentle mist;
Enchant the land with amethyst.
Slow, slow!
For the grapes' sake, if they were all,
Whose leaves already are burnt with frost,
Whose clustered fruit must else be lost—
For the grapes' sake along the wall.

Tanka  -  Carpe Diem Haiku Kai
(a distillation of the above poem)






october be hushed
make  the day amethyst 
beguile be gentle
waste not the last remnants
of the warm morning sun







10 comments:

  1. I would love to be dissolved in these remnants:)

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  2. the October morning mild: that is all about autumnal bliss. beautiful write.

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  3. Wonderful. And the day, my day,feels less brief in amethyst and

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  4. I'm afraid that I waste too much of the morning sun...by getting ready to go to work! Looking forward to the day that I walk out of the classroom for the last time, and into the morning sun forever!

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  5. A nice destilation of Robert Frosts poem Well done

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  6. "October be hushed"....lovely writing Cressida!

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  7. "... make the day amethyst...". Perfect!

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