we can still listen
to count basie at the back
of the bus
slow dance
knee deep in
crackling autumn leaves
crunch honey'd popcorn
at the movies
just like kids
smile
when we think of each other
sometimes
take
care
li'l darlin'
Heeding Haiku with Chevrefeuille
There is a lilting, melancholy vibe to the tune that makes me think of autumn. And your words put a smile on my face.
ReplyDeleteFun, romantic and nostalgic...lovely autumn series
ReplyDeleteSlow dance in the leaves...such a gorgeous image.
ReplyDeleteThis made me smile. There's a bit of humor in it for me. :)
ReplyDeleteIn the "slow dance" haiku, I hear not autumn leaves crackling, but my own knees! :)
ReplyDeleteOh you are such a romantic MMT:)
DeleteThis is so unbelievably romantic!! ❤️
ReplyDeleteRoad trips and relationships spring to my mind. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteLOL, re MMT's comment. Your poem evoked autumn beautifully.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful read! I want to frolic in the leaves again!
ReplyDeleteSmiles...this is sweet.
ReplyDeleteA most romantic poem bringing back such lovely memories....and oh the music makes me want to slow dance!
ReplyDeleteDonna@LivingFromHappiness
Sweet and musical!
ReplyDeleteAh memories... moments... live on in hearts.
ReplyDeleteI like this but I can never figure you out ? :)
ReplyDeleteZQ
Oh well...not everyone can be an Einstein:)
ReplyDeleteGood to see you made it out of Florida in one piece.