Wednesday, 5 July 2017

Tanka



stroking his neck with
a passion flower he recalled
her thick eyelashes
butterfly kissing she said
he closed his eyes and smiled

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai
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12 comments:

  1. Chèvrefeuille5 July 2017 at 17:51

    Awesome ... romance like fireworks

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  2. Jae Rose9 July 2017 at 06:22

    Perfect Tanka

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  3. J.N.T.9 July 2017 at 07:03

    Ooh this is so sensual. Love your way of expressing romance my friend.

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  4. Sumana Roy9 July 2017 at 07:09

    Sweet memories...

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  5. Donna9 July 2017 at 10:30

    Made me smile too to read these rich romantic images!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  6. indybev9 July 2017 at 10:44

    Oh, I remember butterfly kisses ... hadn't thought of them in ages. Thank you.

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  7. Myrna R.9 July 2017 at 11:54

    Nice. I can so clearly see the scene you describe. Very romantic and subtle - like a butterlfly kiss.

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  8. ayala9 July 2017 at 12:17

    Sweet memory!

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  9. Sherry Blue Sky9 July 2017 at 12:31

    Lovely to envision.

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  10. Anonymous9 July 2017 at 16:09

    Been there. Heavenly

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  11. Old Egg9 July 2017 at 16:13

    How well you recapture the closeness of love so well when lovers lose themselves in each other.

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  12. Sanaa Rizvi9 July 2017 at 16:33

    Soo romantic!!❤️

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