lost breath drowning dressed mirror mine
it was discovered
years later
they were an exceptional couple
mirror images of each other
dressed to kill
a brilliant match
a gold mine of potential
successful
living in the lap of luxury
until they lost everything
they boarded a boat
took a deep breath
and scuttled it to the bottom of the ocean blue
drowning themselves
love eh !
Surely it is better to disappear and take a new identity. Not much potential at the bottom of the ocean! Great use of the words.
ReplyDeleteI guess they enjoyed whilst they had it! At least now they are down mong the pearls
ReplyDeleteMy tale is called White
Some of the most successful people have also experienced a lot of failures and learned from their mistakes. It is so sad that this couple couldn't take that approach.
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