Saturday, 11 June 2016

Sunday's Whirligig

sister came flashes altered distorted recall
week moments writing years three uneasy


 three years ago
sister filomena flashes came to town

i recall that
altered distorted uneasy moment
as if it happened last week

my hand writing
has never been the same

6 comments:

  1. Great use of the words making up nearly half the total. Top of the class in Economy! I knew a Filomena but she wasn't a nun!

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  2. The image and poem go hand in hand so well - and the last line made me smile - did you have to do handwriting practice too? I also like this take on 'sister'...

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  3. My handwriting is atrocious now because of keyboarding..! I need to practise handwriting. I will write copious pages ...letters to myself:)

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