Saturday, 4 July 2015

Sunday Whirligig 14

 
beginning misty place everything world silent
people talk head nowhere beyond again


in the beginning
the world was a misty place
everything silent and peaceful

then people came along
talking heads nowheresville
gate crashers of the planet

it is beyond me and i ask myself
time and time again why God
made so few nice ones

8 comments:

  1. Ah ... a question I've often asked myself as well ... nicely written. Bastet

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  2. If we had been like caterpillars and had to fend for ourselves from the start and not influenced by our forebears things may have been different.

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  3. I suppose he had so much else to create that he ran out of time! Nice one.

    Visit Keith's Ramblings!

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  4. Yes - if you have faith perhaps those are the kind of questions who need ask..but there are kind people...the very kindest seem to be the ones who ask these questions and keep their minds open to all possible answers

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  5. "gate crashers of the planet"--great line...love this creative creation myth of sorts...very unique take on the prompt words :-)

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  6. I love this and wonder the same many times a week!

    Thanks for coming by. I seem to be challenged to use as few of other words as possible and still make sense. That makes it double challenging to me.

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  7. Why indeed! Well put.

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