Sunday, 12 July 2015

Sunday Whirligig 15


deep bathe loll dialling wrathful fingers
drifting shattering shady parking prance posts





lolling about
in the deep waves
drifting with the tide
prancing bathing in the seaweed
fingers wrinkled
looking back at the striped posts
in the parking lot
the shady parking policeman dialling his cellphone
wrathfully writing a ticket shattering the moment

5 comments:

  1. Policemen always show up at just the WRONG moment, spoiling everything!

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  2. Reality has a terrible moment of shattering those deep and profound moments..a wonderful wash of thought and word

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  3. Definitely choose a more secluded spot next time. That would definitely spoil the moment.

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  4. Ooh...that ticket definitely mars the moment :-(

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  5. Oh darn! What a way to ruin a day! And it was so lovely ... nicely written and take my advice ... let the waves wash away the last event ... :-)

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