Mindlovemisery's Menagerie
what is going through her mind
sad girl imprisoned in flowing silk
is she hoping for a love to find
what is going through her mind
will she know that love is blind
her suitors fickle not of her ilk
what is going through her mind
sad girl so wan and pale as milk
Nicely done! "will she know that love is blind / her suitors fickle not of her ilk" -- brings a sense of hopelessness in the foreshadowing ----
ReplyDeleteOh I really love that closing line and the repetition! How often I wonder about people's thoughts! Beautifully done
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Ah, so many possibilities, but the attitude at the face and in her posture ;) ~ nice triolet.
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done! :0)
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