Tuesday, 9 May 2023

TANKA TUESDAY # 319


 SHADORMA

 

nice back drop
pretty but struggling
yes she  knows
how that feels
withering away on the vine
trying to hang on

 


5 comments:

  1. I love where your focus went, Cressida! Great poem!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  2. very poignant 💜 (AJ)

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  3. I like what you see in the image, and I hope things turn around for her soon.

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  4. Oh! That's deep very deep. Love it 😏

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