someones loved piano
someones war
all destroyed
just collateral damage
in a brutal world
Sunday Muse # 150
“someones loved pianosomeones war”I love the second line going into the next, how one feeds into the other, how they work together. Beautiful.
This photo conjures so many different stories. I like yours very much!
You have captured the image so well.
Sadly your words ring true. A heart wrenching and beautiful poem that captures the image well. Always glad to see you at the Muse Cressida!
Strikes deep. Individual care can't compete with societal chaos.
Spoils of war not wanted here, waste for the conquerors. Nice write, dreadful thoughts. ..
Nice form! 'Just' - such a strong word, carefully placed.
Smaetly Brief. What happened? Why? Are the questions that remain..
Oh the foibles of humanity!Happy Sundaymuch💓love
Collateral damage - indeed. sigh
Such waste.
And the reasons probably long-forgotten now. You say a lot in very few words.Lisa at tao-talk
The brevity of your poem speaks volumes which makes it an awesome write!!!
The world can be most unkind. You captured that well.
“someones loved piano
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I love the second line going into the next, how one feeds into the other, how they work together. Beautiful.
This photo conjures so many different stories. I like yours very much!
ReplyDeleteYou have captured the image so well.
ReplyDeleteSadly your words ring true. A heart wrenching and beautiful poem that captures the image well. Always glad to see you at the Muse Cressida!
ReplyDeleteStrikes deep. Individual care can't compete with societal chaos.
ReplyDeleteSpoils of war not wanted here, waste for the conquerors.
ReplyDeleteNice write, dreadful thoughts.
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Nice form! 'Just' - such a strong word, carefully placed.
ReplyDeleteSmaetly Brief. What happened? Why? Are the questions that remain..
ReplyDeleteOh the foibles of humanity!
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday
much💓love
Collateral damage - indeed. sigh
ReplyDeleteSuch waste.
ReplyDeleteAnd the reasons probably long-forgotten now. You say a lot in very few words.
ReplyDeleteLisa at tao-talk
The brevity of your poem speaks volumes which makes it an awesome write!!!
ReplyDeleteThe world can be most unkind. You captured that well.
ReplyDelete