Saturday, 18 August 2018

I. Handel Arrival of the Queen of Sheba - The Sixteen





Queen Of Sheba

who do you think you are?
the queen of sheba

yes
every girl's a queen
deserving of
making an entrance
with celebration music

a curtsey and nod
to the word weavers
jungle cat lovers
handel
celestial wind choirs
oboes

tis an ill wind
that only a few
blow very very good

15 comments:

  1. Love the attitude in this poem!💜 You go girl!😊

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  2. It's why there is one queen and ten thousand enrapt quotidians. We used to call it natural selection, but now we suspect its just privileged ... privilege.

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  3. I love these lines:
    'a curtsey and nod
    to the word weavers
    jungle cat lovers
    handel
    celestial wind choirs
    oboes'.

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  4. Such a classic image portrayed in a lovely tangent of words with line breaks, just like the instrumentation. I really like how you have stylized it in this form.
    -HA

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  5. I am with Sanaa, the attitude is wonderful! A confident air of true beauty!!

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  6. Learning so much, and loving everything I'm reading.

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  7. You had me at the last stanza

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  8. A wonderful allude to the queen, which I of course always think of as a jungle cat instead of a human.

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  9. Love the wordplay in the last stanza...
    ...I might've giggled a bit (because I am terrible).

    And yes, everyone deserves...

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  10. Shy or bold there is still something extra they need and that is sincerity...as for Cleopatra she just waved the privilege flag.

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  11. I will admit to imagining epic theme music for myself from time to time if the moment calls for it.

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  12. A royal tone for a powerful acclaimation! Well done!

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  13. My favorite music -- and oboes! And you have done such a beautiful job of wrapping it up like a gift, multi-layered and the last line just made me burst out laughing. And then go play my favorite music again, this time as the queen, nodding. I love this so much. -- Victoria Stuart

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  14. Glad someone got the oboe joke. In the music world it is said the oboe is the ill wind that nobody plays any good (because it is such a difficult instrument to play.)

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