Friday, 22 December 2017

First Line Friday - MLMM



alexi watched the snowfall
with narrowed eyes
maybe if he willed her to come
she would appear from behind a tree
if he could hold her just once
sink into her soul
find a few moments of peace
it would be enough

5 comments:

  1. Perhaps ... but we always want more, don't we?

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  2. The thought of wanting to "sink into" someone else's soul in order to find peace is very romantic... and troubling. Completely perfect if the sinking is welcomed, but if it isn't... everyone involved will be in for a world of hurt...

    Love this. You've capture the tension and rawness of wanting (needing) peace so well.

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