canopy harm held irreversible billow
pear simmer chew infest ashen
a canopy of pears
held up by tree branches
billowing in the wind
infested with grubs
chewing away
the rot irreversible
the harm already done
you simmering with anger
ashen face'd with rage
MLMM
Very vivid imagery
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I feel smoldering, sickening anger from this. Excellent descriptive words and phrasing.
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