Oh! I love this haiku! The last line is the perfect full stop to the "plaintive notes".:DRisa
It is very evocative. More than blinking lizards but I can picture them too.
Wow Cressida what a beautiful revision of the haiku by Basho. Well done!
Great imagery
How beautiful
The lizard's blink kind of slows down time - beautiful!
Nicely created haiku Cressida ... that lizard's blink ... awesome find
Shakuhachi The Japanese Flute...video
Oh! I love this haiku! The last line is the perfect full stop to the "plaintive notes".:D
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It is very evocative. More than blinking lizards but I can picture them too.
ReplyDeleteWow Cressida what a beautiful revision of the haiku by Basho. Well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful
ReplyDeleteThe lizard's blink kind of slows down time - beautiful!
ReplyDeleteNicely created haiku Cressida ... that lizard's blink ... awesome find
ReplyDeleteShakuhachi The Japanese Flute...video
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