Monday, 14 March 2016

The Young Victoria - Waltzing at the Ball




Sunday Whirligig

body bird bent shades echoes mirrors
scent softness crown snaring empty blind


victoria's body
like a delicate bird
mirror'd scented softness
shades and echoes of love
for young albert

originally
he
empty  intent bent
on a snaring a crown
soon found himself
completely blindly
in love with her

2 comments:

  1. Ah....it would appear that young Albert is the one who ended up snared ;-)

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  2. You have executed the prompt(s) with admirable efficiency. And it's a poem which tells a whole story! I especially like those...

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